| = Obviously | Heghedus Camelia [29.Aug.08 18:44] |
| Your poetry is not at all jejune! I didn’t read anything suchlike. Sometimes, your originality has something jointly with the eccentricity. Maybe because these intercostals are acute emotions/pains, that need a special technique for being represented. The oddness from your writings, when isn’t symbol, is an of courage deed, betraying the gameness from the behind of lines. Concerning me, I adore the leisure caliph’s poetry. | |
| = Scratch my steel inforcements | John Willy Kopperud [30.Jul.07 11:08] |
Since Nirvana is the state of perfect illumination where the soul is freed from all pain and passion, is this some kind of phantom pain? Anyway, I do enjoy your way of painting concrete, often surreal pictures in your poems. This one is no exception. | |
| = free | Edilberto González Trejos [30.Jul.07 19:43] |
| Thus Freedom was sighted. Great text Felix SONGO | |
| = Why? | Simona Sumanaru [29.Aug.08 17:45] |
| Why does she always have to laugh... Eve? Why does she always have to be stuck to the ground, and worship pain? | |
| = a wee | felix nicolau [30.Aug.08 23:10] |
| i feel absolutely horrible for not having responded to those who commented this low-brow text. simona, i think because eves resist better to pain. they are a wee masoquistic while we are sadistic, we adams | |