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= gold between molecules
Corina Dragomir
[07.Aug.04 23:21]
The caffeine gold molecules seem to act like a natural spectrum through a wedge-shaped glass prism where the first taste melts in tears on "a meadow with dew under the sun" outrageously mixing "yellow, green or white" leaving behind only Beta particles that can penetrate the light and soon after inhaled with platinum between vapors.
I think the entire poem irradiates of radioactive emissions of pure sensibility fairly perceptible in the key-line:"will you defuse me?".
you omitted a "t" in the future negative form - won'

Cory

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= gold between molecules	Corina Dragomir [07.Aug.04 23:21]
The caffeine gold molecules seem to act like a natural spectrum through a wedge-shaped glass prism where the first taste melts in tears on "a meadow with dew under the sun" outrageously mixing "yellow, green or white" leaving behind only Beta particles that can penetrate the light and soon after inhaled with platinum between vapors. I think the entire poem irradiates of radioactive emissions of pure sensibility fairly perceptible in the key-line:"will you defuse me?". you omitted a "t" in the future negative form - won' Cory